Twist and Turns

Your offbeat to society, but perfect for me.

Don’t get discouraged by anyone.

No one knows you like I do.

I would give anything, so that you wouldn’t have to worry.

Despite the twist and turns life takes us through, I will still be by your side.



  1. Not to impugn your work in the slightest, but just to help it: perhaps change “your” to “you’re” where appropriate? Perhaps it was an oversight, perhaps intentional, and again i do not mean to be presumptuous, but what is the world of the poetry blog for if not that iron may sharpen iron? 🙂 Otherwise it is refreshing for poetry to be uplifting rather than simply morose. i look forward to reading more. i hope you have not taken offense at my proofreading.

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